verse: amazing grace how sweet the sound, your voice is like a harp being played. Your hair is so beautiful like a dolphin jumping over the sea. Chorus: Romeo take me somewhere we can be alone, al thats left to do is run, you'll be the prince and i'll be the princess its a love story baby jsut say yes. Ok what do you think the first verse is meant to be short, please give me feedback would be appreciated thankyou (i haven't finished the song yet im only through the first verse so please dont say it is a little short)
Only the first 3 lines are original; the rest copied from Taylor Swift's "Love Story".
I recommend changing the chorus to this:
"Now that I've said to you all the right things,
Take me to bed and the joy that it brings!
When you wake up and yoprince dolphin lyricsu don't see me there,
Check your purse, cause I'll need cab fare.
That's our 15 Seconds of Love
That's our 15 Seconds of Love
I think it will make a mint if we can get Lady GaGa to sing it.
Wow that's really good, I think you have a good career ahead of you!
I thought better of you Spongebob! Copying other peoples work! Tut-tut!
it seems romantic..nice should be classicaly made
Haha.
sounds a lot like other ppls work
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Oh dear god...You've got to be kidding me...
I'm sorry sweetie but...You need alot of work....Sorry to those people who said it was awesome...They lied...
"Amazing grace, how sweet the sound" is already a song. "Amazing grace"!!!
The lyrics are sort of corny....
The chorus is taylor swifts song...
That's copyright, it's illeprince dolphin lyricsgal.
I assume your quite young so i'm going to say sorry. But be origional sweetie. Don't copy someone elses work. Those works have already been done. Do you honestly think people will like a copycat song? No. It's been done already. You needd tp do something origional, that no one else has done.
Keep at it though. You sound like your very new to this, and for that, you get a gold star for trying :)
Keep working on it...Delete the other artists works...Make your own...
Why would anyone want to remember you as an artist if you aren't true and don't write your OWN stuff?
Don't let this get you down...Keep practising and you'll improve...
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